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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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first of all,
THIS IS SO FRIGGINTASTICALLY AMAZING!!!!!!!
wow. just wow.
You have made excellent texture, especially for the fur on the head, and the eyes are absolutely mesmerizing. seriously. i think they could hypnotize me right now.
Huh, well there's not much to critic.
Hmmm, well the sky behind Crowfeather is a bit blurry, and it would have been slightly more realistic to make them look more cloudy shaped. Right now it reminds me a bit of ocean waves. Also, like you have probably already been told the left ear is a bit too pink, especially in comparison with the right one (even if it is in shadow).
also, although the anatomy is amazing the basic shape of Crowy's head is not as much like a cat than like a panther or lynx.
I mean, the head looks slightly too big and stuff. To make it more cat-like it would be good to make his head more slender, and also to remove those eyebrow-looking things he has. and also change the nose's color otherwise it kind of blends in with the fur and makes it like a human nose. you could also make the nose a wee bit shorter. other than that, you could make the whiskers slightly less curved?
either way, this is seriously amazing. the texture and the eyes and the light effects are your big talent. I can see emotion in those eyes. a kind of hard, cold expression.
also, i think he has amber eyes but he does look better with blue. i noticed he has kind of eyeliner around his eyes? it might be more realistic if you don't do that.
I dunno, this is just my opinion. i like writing critiques. Anyways, i really hope I helped, it was hard to find stuff to improve. this is really really awesome. Crowfeather, STOP STARING AT MEH!
gives me the shivers
The left ear is a bit off, a little too pink at the top, black cats ears are black unless you are acctually looking into the ear.
The sunset is great! It looks windy, which is also great.
I greaty enjoy how you made the sunset reflecting in his fur.
You added perfect amount of shadows and shading to make his appearance amazing. It is much better then anything i could EVER do.
Just beautiful, really, really beautiful. Keep up the good work!
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