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Yellowfang by ashkey Yellowfang by ashkey
I think these are the only things keeping me from losing my mind. :D Four weeks left until I graduate you guyz amg stress

Thank you everyone for the nice comments on these, and sorry for being really slow about replying. I've been stupidly busy and when I'm not working all I want to do is hide. XD

Yellowfang from Warriors series by Erin Hunter.
Media: Corel Painter Essentials 4.0, about 1.5-2 hours this time idk why it was so fast
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Critique by BlastedShow132 Jul 3, 2012, 1:54:45 PM
Okay. Before I get critical, I just want to say congrats on drawing such a wonderful piece of artwork. Okay? Okay.

Now. First thing is, the fur is excellent. I love the brush(es) you used to create it. It adds a really realistic look towards the view.

Next thing is the eyes. I can see you blended highlights, but I don't see many shadows. This takes away from the depth and impact of the artwork. I suggest adding one more bit of light source. This will show more brightness to the picture, and will add to the technique. Also, add alot more shadows in both eyes - more in the farthest eye than the closest, as realistically, it would be farther away from the light source, resulting in more shadow.

Alright. The muzzle is perfect in shape. Yellowfang has a flattened nose, and you captured that perfectly. One thing I am concerned about is the chin - It just molds in with the neck. Use darker grays for shading ; this will add depth and will add better vision. Now, Yellowfang had many battle scars. I only see two faint ones on her muzzle ; I suggest either adding more, or making the two more bold.

Lastly, add more shading towards the left side of the drawing.

Overall, this artwork is amazing. Great job!
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chotabear Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
This captures Yellowfang perfectly, exactly how my mind pictures her.   One of my favourite Warrior characters and I'm currently reading Yellowfang's Secret.   I love the grumpy charm of this sweet old lady !!!   :) 
AlexaTiger17 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love the eye's
DI-AlecHardy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Yellowfang looks amazing <3
Winter-Wondermare Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed he does. And I found you. XD
DI-AlecHardy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Again wow OwO
WarriorCat071 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yellowfang dun gunna kill yurt sleep. Misspellings were done on purpose *-*
wolfpup33 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Artist
She looks like grumpy cat. x3
Love the art! Beautiful and realistic. I have always imagined her looking like this c:
mimismiyth Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is the destination one I have seen it really bring out the persain in her
Tyto-Alba11704 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant! :)
TheFluffyKitty12 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she is the cutest cat ever
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